Task Correction 2

Yesterday, in Reñaca something incredible happened, I found one million of Chilean pesos! I was in the Subway with my mom and when I looked under the table, I  saw the money and I shouted: I found 1 million pesos! All of the people were surprised and all of  them congratulated me.In that moment, My mom asked me: "What are you going to do withe the money?" And I answered: "I really don't know what to do with this money".

I am not  very sure of what I am going to do with this money. I was thinking of buying an Iphone, a computer, an Xbox 360, etc. or I can keep all the money. The thing is that I found a lot of money and I can do whatever I want with all that money

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Task Correction 1

The Estict Rules of Allsop Academy

Allsop Academy is a school that, lastly, has changed some of their rules. It passed from being one of the least estrict from being one of the most . This is because of the arrival of the new headteacher, Michael Wilson, who invented a lot of rules.This are some of the rules that invented the headteacther: The students have to stand in lines to wait for the teacher. Teachers send them home if they wear wrong shoes, if their hair is too long or too short and the teachers send them home if they use a cellphone in classes. In the lunch time, they cannot go to fast food shops and if they don't do their homework they have to stay on after school.

After of this changed, the behavior was awful, but now, the students behave excellent. In my opinion, the new rules are good because in that way the students behave excellent and with the old rules, the students behave awful

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My Common Mistakes

Name: Franco Schiaffino

Day: Wednesday,  21st of August, 2013

Grade: 8th Grade ISE1

Mistake Nº1: Beautifull

Correction: Beautiful

Grammar rule: Spelling

Examples:

Wonderfull (Wrong): Wonderful (Right)   

Amasing (Wrong): Amazing (Right)

Link to practice: http://www.morewords.com/contains/mm/

http://www.momswhothink.com/reading/list-of-verbs.html

Mistake Nº2:I likes very much Italy

Correction: I like very much Italy

Grammar rule: Simple present tense

Examples:

She always forget her jersey (Wrong): She always forgets her jersey (Right)

I have to hurries up (Wrong): I have to hurry up (Right)

Link to practice: http://www.englishpage.com/verbpage/simplepresent.html

http://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/tests/simple-present-1

Mistake Nº3: When I were in Paris, I went to the Eiffel Tower

Correction:When I was in Paris, I went to the Eiffel Tower

Grammar rule: Simple past tense

Examples:

He weren't happy (Wrong): He wasn't happy (Right)

They was playing (Wrong): They were playing (Right)

Link to practice:http://www.myenglishpages.com/site_php_files/grammar-exercise-simple-past.php
http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/en/exercises/tenses/was_were.htm


Mistake Nº 4: I are surprised because of the variety of monuments in Rome 
Correction: I was surprised because of the variety of monuments in Rome 
Grammar rule: Simple past vs present perfect

Examples:
The teacher see him eating (Wrong): The teacher saw him eating (Right)
He arrive In England two weeks ago (Wrong): He arrived In England two weeks ago
Link to practice: http://www.englishexercises.org/makeagame/viewgame.asp?id=5211
http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/en/exercises/tenses/simple_past_present_perfect.htm


Mistake Nº5: He like the Coloseum
Correction: He likes the Coloseum
Grammar rule: Simple preesent tense

Examples:
I like to goes to the supermarket (Wrong): I like to go to the supermarket (Right)
He work every day (Wrong): He works every day (Right)
Link to practice: http://a4esl.org/q/h/lb/psv.html
http://www.really-learn-english.com/simple-present-exercises.html

Trinity Project. Section 3. Task 5

My Trip to Italy

In the month of July, I went to some parts of the beautiful country of Italy. I started in the capital Rome. It is a city with a big variety of monuments, such as, “Il Colosseum”, “Il  Pantheon”, etc. Then, I went to a city characterized by the art, like “Il David”, the most important. Then I went to the city that I liked the most Venecia, that instead of streets, have canals. Finally, I finish in Genova, a city that, in my opinion, is not beautiful, but it has beaches, that are good. In Genova, I went to my uncle’s house and I saw him for first time. Italy, is a wonderful country and I want to go again.

Trinity Project. Section 3. Task 3

The Surprise Party

The last Saturday, I, with help of my other friends, did the best surprise party ever. The secret party, was for my friend Francis, with the proposal of say him goodbye , because he will go to Las Vegas in September 5, because his father is working there and he will not return to Chile. The party was in my house, to make him come without his knowledge about the party, we said him to come to study with us. When we entered to my house, all shouted “Surprise!” I think, he never guessed about the party because of his face of surprise. The party was awesome, we eat ,we dance, we talk, etc.  Unfortunately, Francis has to go to Las Vegas.

Trinity Project. Section 2. Task 5

The Bad Referees

The other day, I watched an amazing soccer match: Borussia Dormunt vs Bayer Munich. The score was 4 for Borussia and 4 for Bayer Munich. But, when they where in the minute 90', foul in the area! and the referee didn't awarded the penalty! In my opinion, this is unacceptable. That penalty could change the match. I think that the organizers, that in this case are from "The Champions" should change the referees to better referees. Apart from that mistake, they didn't award 2 other penalties that, in my opinion, wear clear too and they annul 2 goals because of offside and they weren't too! The referees today are awful.