Task Correction 2

Yesterday, in Reñaca something incredible happened, I found one million of Chilean pesos! I was in the Subway with my mom and when I looked under the table, I  saw the money and I shouted: I found 1 million pesos! All of the people were surprised and all of  them congratulated me.In that moment, My mom asked me: "What are you going to do withe the money?" And I answered: "I really don't know what to do with this money".

I am not  very sure of what I am going to do with this money. I was thinking of buying an Iphone, a computer, an Xbox 360, etc. or I can keep all the money. The thing is that I found a lot of money and I can do whatever I want with all that money

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Task Correction 1

The Estict Rules of Allsop Academy

Allsop Academy is a school that, lastly, has changed some of their rules. It passed from being one of the least estrict from being one of the most . This is because of the arrival of the new headteacher, Michael Wilson, who invented a lot of rules.This are some of the rules that invented the headteacther: The students have to stand in lines to wait for the teacher. Teachers send them home if they wear wrong shoes, if their hair is too long or too short and the teachers send them home if they use a cellphone in classes. In the lunch time, they cannot go to fast food shops and if they don't do their homework they have to stay on after school.

After of this changed, the behavior was awful, but now, the students behave excellent. In my opinion, the new rules are good because in that way the students behave excellent and with the old rules, the students behave awful

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My Common Mistakes

Name: Franco Schiaffino

Day: Wednesday,  21st of August, 2013

Grade: 8th Grade ISE1

Mistake Nº1: Beautifull

Correction: Beautiful

Grammar rule: Spelling

Examples:

Wonderfull (Wrong): Wonderful (Right)   

Amasing (Wrong): Amazing (Right)

Link to practice: http://www.morewords.com/contains/mm/

http://www.momswhothink.com/reading/list-of-verbs.html

Mistake Nº2:I likes very much Italy

Correction: I like very much Italy

Grammar rule: Simple present tense

Examples:

She always forget her jersey (Wrong): She always forgets her jersey (Right)

I have to hurries up (Wrong): I have to hurry up (Right)

Link to practice: http://www.englishpage.com/verbpage/simplepresent.html

http://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/tests/simple-present-1

Mistake Nº3: When I were in Paris, I went to the Eiffel Tower

Correction:When I was in Paris, I went to the Eiffel Tower

Grammar rule: Simple past tense

Examples:

He weren't happy (Wrong): He wasn't happy (Right)

They was playing (Wrong): They were playing (Right)

Link to practice:http://www.myenglishpages.com/site_php_files/grammar-exercise-simple-past.php
http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/en/exercises/tenses/was_were.htm


Mistake Nº 4: I are surprised because of the variety of monuments in Rome 
Correction: I was surprised because of the variety of monuments in Rome 
Grammar rule: Simple past vs present perfect

Examples:
The teacher see him eating (Wrong): The teacher saw him eating (Right)
He arrive In England two weeks ago (Wrong): He arrived In England two weeks ago
Link to practice: http://www.englishexercises.org/makeagame/viewgame.asp?id=5211
http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/en/exercises/tenses/simple_past_present_perfect.htm


Mistake Nº5: He like the Coloseum
Correction: He likes the Coloseum
Grammar rule: Simple preesent tense

Examples:
I like to goes to the supermarket (Wrong): I like to go to the supermarket (Right)
He work every day (Wrong): He works every day (Right)
Link to practice: http://a4esl.org/q/h/lb/psv.html
http://www.really-learn-english.com/simple-present-exercises.html

Trinity Project. Section 3. Task 5

My Trip to Italy

In the month of July, I went to some parts of the beautiful country of Italy. I started in the capital Rome. It is a city with a big variety of monuments, such as, “Il Colosseum”, “Il  Pantheon”, etc. Then, I went to a city characterized by the art, like “Il David”, the most important. Then I went to the city that I liked the most Venecia, that instead of streets, have canals. Finally, I finish in Genova, a city that, in my opinion, is not beautiful, but it has beaches, that are good. In Genova, I went to my uncle’s house and I saw him for first time. Italy, is a wonderful country and I want to go again.

Trinity Project. Section 3. Task 3

The Surprise Party

The last Saturday, I, with help of my other friends, did the best surprise party ever. The secret party, was for my friend Francis, with the proposal of say him goodbye , because he will go to Las Vegas in September 5, because his father is working there and he will not return to Chile. The party was in my house, to make him come without his knowledge about the party, we said him to come to study with us. When we entered to my house, all shouted “Surprise!” I think, he never guessed about the party because of his face of surprise. The party was awesome, we eat ,we dance, we talk, etc.  Unfortunately, Francis has to go to Las Vegas.

Trinity Project. Section 2. Task 5

The Bad Referees

The other day, I watched an amazing soccer match: Borussia Dormunt vs Bayer Munich. The score was 4 for Borussia and 4 for Bayer Munich. But, when they where in the minute 90', foul in the area! and the referee didn't awarded the penalty! In my opinion, this is unacceptable. That penalty could change the match. I think that the organizers, that in this case are from "The Champions" should change the referees to better referees. Apart from that mistake, they didn't award 2 other penalties that, in my opinion, wear clear too and they annul 2 goals because of offside and they weren't too! The referees today are awful.

Trinity Project. Section 2. Task 4

 How to Plan the Perfect Party

The last morning I was thinking to do a party, the best party ever. In my opinion, the perfect party should have good music, with a DJ and good dupstep. Another thing that should have is good food, such as French fries, potatoes chips, nachos with cheese, etc. and should have good sodas like Coca Cola, Fanta, Sprite, etc. I think that we should start to invite a great amount of people the earlier possible. I think that some parties are not very successful because the organizers don’t take the time to organize well all the minimum details. Personally, I prefer the parties with a lot of people because I think you can share more with the people.

Trinity project. Section 1. Task 3

Dear Francis:

I am writing you because I want to tell you that I take part in a football competition to meet Andrea Pirlo. It is a competition of boys of 11 to 16 years old. It consist in the boy who make more tricks, win. I like very much Andrea Pirlo, so I am practicing all day the tricks.

See you,

Franco Schiaffino

Trinity Project. Section 1. Task 5

Dear Francis,

I am writing you because I Heard that you want to be a T.V presenter. In my opinion, you have to go to the  School of“Santa María De Calama”. In aproximately 2 months, you will be the better presenter of Chile, I know it, all the famous study there. Some examples of Famous that study there are Rafael Araneda, Felipe Camiroaga, Jose Miguel Viñuela, Etc. I think, that it is a very good school. 

Lot of luck,
Franco

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Tobacco Task 2

Thieves in Calama assault a van with 600.000 pesos in cigars of Tobacco

In the second region of Chile, a thieves assault a van with 600.000 pesos in cigars and two cars also.

In Chile, the problem with the Tobacco is every time worst. In June 5, thieves with a gun assaulted a van with 600.000 pesos in Tobacco. The van was recovered about 1 hour after, but empty. The thieves used 2 cars more to transport the cigars.

 That  occurred at 8:30 A.M in the road to Calama. The thieves surrounded the van with 2 cars (that were stolen also), and they forced the driver, with a gun in their hands, to get out of the van. After, the thieves entered to the van and they escaped with the van and the cigars.

The driver told this to the police. Initially, they couldn’t  find them, because the thieves turned off the GPS, but finally, they found the van in a Street. The van’s door and windows were broken and it was until now empty. The police are trying to find the thieves with their fingerprints, but they cannot find any until now. They are trying to find the owners of the 2 cars that were stolen by the thieves also.

A coincidence is, that 2 days before, were stolen 520.000 packs of cigars, but in this case, the police found the cigars and the criminals.

Tobacco Task 1

Tobacco In The School

Today, the Tobacco is one of the most important problems in the schools. It’s a problem that the schools have to resolve quickly.

The Tobacco is very big a problem in the Schools. An occasional smoking can finish in a serious addiction. In 2012, we could find that the 4.9 percent of the eight graders, the 10.8 percent of the tenth graders and the 17.1 percent of the twelfth graders had smoked. This is a big problem that the Schools have to resolve quickly. If this continues, 6.3 millions of kids under 18 years will die because of this. The kids will have serious diseases and they will be addicted to the Tobacco. The Tobacco is used in the adolescent like a gateway to the illegal drug use like Marijuana, Cocaine, Heroin, etc.

The Schools have a very important role of reducing Tobacco in the students. The Schools have many ways to reduce it: they have to forbid the Tobacco use by the students at the School, putting staff envigilatin that in all the areas of the School; They have to forbid teachers smoking in the Schools, because when they see people smoking Tobacco, they think that it is good, so they do it ; They have to do good events and programs about the bad of Tobacco to let them know that  Tobacco is bad; They have to  teach them about Tobacco because that helps them to get informed about the Tobacco and the consequences of it; They have to provide programs to the teachers, because when the teachers know about the Tobacco prevention, they are prepared to teach the students about it; They have to teach the parents and the families about it because they have a big influence in the students, so they have to teach them to no consume Tobacco; They have to offer projects about the consequences of Tobacco, because they learn about the Tobacco and that influence in the consume; When a student starts to consume Tobacco, they have to help him to quit  Tobacco because when someone tries the Tobacco and he likes it, it’s very difficult to quit Tobacco, independent if you want to quit ;  They have to adopt a firm policy of not accepting anything from any Tobacco company, like book covers or things like that because if they accept that, the students would think that the School is like in accordance with a Tobacco foundation, so they think that the Tobacco is good

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Letter

The Principal
USA English School
Washington


Dear Principal,
I am writing you because I want to ask you if I can course in your school. I investigated and your school looks good to me. I am from The Mackay School and I like my teacher, but I want to improve my grammar because isn't very good comparing with my very good speaking. I would be very proud if you awnser me the fastest posible and give me more information if you can.

Your future student,
Franco Schiaffino

Andrew Lane Interview

1.-
Hooked: Addicted

Memorabilia:  Matters or events worthy to be remembered.
Sideline: A second occupation.
Whether: Conjunction that means “If”.
Attendance: The number of people present at a event
Attempting: Trying to do it.
Chemistry: The science that deals with the composition and properties of substances  and various elementary forms of matter.
Church jumble sale: Sale of used things.

2.- Answer the following questions

1.- How did Andrew became hooked on Sherlock Holmes stories?

He became hooked with Sherlock Holmes stories in a Church jumble sale when he bought his first book of Arthur Conan Doyle

2.- Was Sherlock Holmes a real person?

Someones thought that Sherlock was a real person, but other not.

3.- Why has Andrew been criticized by some of Arthur Conan Doyle’s fans?

Because fans wants Sherlock Holmes to be exactly as Conan Doyle wrote in his books of Sherlock Holmes.

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Homework

1. Which one would you choose?

-I would like to go to haven.

2. What is it about the holiday that made you choose it? Be specific.

-I choose haven because it has a to much of entertainment such as slides, good food and is a good place to have fun

3. If you could choose one person to go with you, who would it be? why?
-I would go with my grandfaher because he likes very much this and I think that I would have too much fun

Listening activity

 1.- What do people want when they travel?
They want to travel with no preasure about the check in or the line ups, and not time wasted
 2.- What are the complications of independent travel?
 The time wasted
 3.- What can you miss out without personal connections during your trip?
 Events, signtseeings, restaurants, etc
 4.- How does select choices work?
 It provides you information, hotels, transportation, etc. But you are indepent on what you wanna do 5.- Mention the essentials offered by select choices.
 Transfers, hotels, hosting services, etc 
6.- What will the personal concierge do for you?
 He wil provide local insides, introductions and city oriental tools
7.- Do you agree with the slogan "independent touring made easy"? why? 
Yes, because you do what ever you want but the help you finding hotels and with transportation, etc.