Task Correction 2

Yesterday, in Reñaca something incredible happened, I found one million of Chilean pesos! I was in the Subway with my mom and when I looked under the table, I  saw the money and I shouted: I found 1 million pesos! All of the people were surprised and all of  them congratulated me.In that moment, My mom asked me: "What are you going to do withe the money?" And I answered: "I really don't know what to do with this money".

I am not  very sure of what I am going to do with this money. I was thinking of buying an Iphone, a computer, an Xbox 360, etc. or I can keep all the money. The thing is that I found a lot of money and I can do whatever I want with all that money

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Task Correction 1

The Estict Rules of Allsop Academy

Allsop Academy is a school that, lastly, has changed some of their rules. It passed from being one of the least estrict from being one of the most . This is because of the arrival of the new headteacher, Michael Wilson, who invented a lot of rules.This are some of the rules that invented the headteacther: The students have to stand in lines to wait for the teacher. Teachers send them home if they wear wrong shoes, if their hair is too long or too short and the teachers send them home if they use a cellphone in classes. In the lunch time, they cannot go to fast food shops and if they don't do their homework they have to stay on after school.

After of this changed, the behavior was awful, but now, the students behave excellent. In my opinion, the new rules are good because in that way the students behave excellent and with the old rules, the students behave awful

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